Thursday, April 21, 2011

An update and Disclaimer

****THIS IS AN UPDATE****

NOT A CHAPTER….
AS SOON AS MY PREREADER GIVES ME THE THUMBS UP
SINCE IT HAS ALREADY BEEN BETA’D IT WILL BE POSTED!!

This update contains spoilers because I am getting bombarded with Emails about what is going to happen with Isabella and Cauis.

YOU GUYS ARE KILLING ME HERE WITH THESE
SO I HOPE THIS HELPS


I could just say read it and find out but I feel I owe it to you guys that
I can understand are sensitive to certain subjects although I don’t understand how
Reading a BDSM story is something you would want when your senstative to similar topics but that’s not for me to decide or figure out…I am not a therapist.

So here is the deal…

If you have no problem reading dark and angsty and don’t want the spoilers


 STOP READING NOW!

If you need to know what the rest of this story contains to continue here is the


Disclaimer:

Some seem to think I was joking or missed the previous warning.


WARNING…..WARNING…..WARNING…..WARNING …..WARNING


THIS IS A DARKFIC


The next chapter depicts non consensual drug use, BDSM themes, sexually lewd conduct against an unconscious individual.

There is NO rape or violence
against my character Isabella in the next chapter,
 it does elude to it and there is a scene that mimics the beginning of a
Sexual assault
but for the most part
 NO CAIUS DOES NOT RAPE BELLA!
IT IS NOT MY STYLE…NOR MY DESIRE TO WRITE!

I need to warn about chapter 12 and the remaining chapters of the fic.
I make no apologies for my language
 because I can’t say sorry 70+ times like I said the word Fuck
I obviously get some twisted thrill out of spewing that word out of Edward’s mouth when he is pissed off.

Why 70+ times in one chapter…?

Chapter 12 is entitled

Enraged Vampire

hence the chapter is FUCKING VIOLENT.

Remember…Edward + dark + enraged = a fucking violent chapter! 
 
THE CHOICE OF VOCABULARY I USE FOR THE REMAINDER OF THIS FANFICTION will be vulgar at times.
I WARNED ABOUT THE DARKNESS AND
 TRUST ME IT IS COMING FROM CHAPTER 11 ON. 
 Shhhhh…. Is my FUCKFIC

Make no mistake and I make no excuses!
It has a plot but this is my outlet to see how far I can push the envelope of sex between
A very Dominant vampire with a voracious sexual appetite unlike any other and a human.  

Edward is going to train Isabella to submit to him just as he would if she were a vampire but she will remain human. This will be a learning process for him also because she is so very fragile. There will be times he gets lost in the moment and the monster in him will make his appearance at least once.



Now that they are mated Edward has no choice but to train her to please him his way. Because he is a Dominant even though you haven’t seen any of it yet…
Bella has no idea what she is in for and her innocence is the one thing
Edward craves more than even her blood.
Trust me when I say that their first sexual encounter will seem inappropriate
Because of the fact that Isabella is still drugged.
 However, in my head it isn’t because I know my Bella.
 She wants him just as much as he does her and what he does is what she pleads for.
No he will not have sex with her when she is high but there will be some intimate contact, teasing, and soothing her aches in a subsequent chapter.
  
Can I just plead with you to trust me on this. I will not have Bella being sodomized by Caius in his torture chamber even though I may of eluded to it.
Trust…Me….

And as one of my reviewers ALICEHC24 so eloquently put it

Ah there is a reason why I love your stories!!! 

I wonder if his cum will sparkle when it hits Bella's face.


Hands down the most GOLDEN review EVER!
I laughed my ass off!

But I know from this review she gets me and I would never bring something so horrendous to you like so many other writers have. I don’t need rape and torture to
liven up a story. I write enough smut for that!
And although Edward doesn’t Sparkle in Shhhhh…. Ms. Alicehc24…I guess I
Can improvise and make a special mention
 just for you sweetie when he does that little act !

They need to have an award in the fandom for Reviewers because
This one deserves the honor!  


You all RAWK my world and make my joy of writing so much more enjoyable.
Really.
I will shut up now….and I have to say all this before was fun
But now its time to
Bump this up….as soon as Dianne says good to go I will post.

ISABELLA’S ABDUCTION
‘The devil’s playground’


Chapter End Notes:

HE ISN’T GOING TO WANT TO CHANGE HER ANYTIME SOON.
 SO PLEASE DON’T EXPECT IT.

The following list of soft limits will be included in the remainder of this story…

Vaginal and Anal sex, oral sex, BDSM Scenes, Controlling orgasms, blood play, teasing, taunting, voyeurism, exhibitionism, role play, and  a genital piercing scene.

sexual locations
Edwards beds (unlike any others) Yes all his beds are custom made.
SHOWER
DINING ROOM TABLE
KITCHEN SINK
UP AGAINST THE WALL...OR TWO...OR THREE...HELL LETS MAKE IT FOUR AND COVER THE WHOLE ROOM...
Barn sex (No not what you think! Over a bale of hay! Sheesh!)
Motorcycle sex (only because I ride one and that is just shit hot)
a MASSIVE staircase
Crowded dance floor
in front of an unknowing cop
in a movie theater
in a limo
in a hot tub
under Daddy C's roof
at a playparty
Every piece of equipment in Edward’s playroom
on a roof
on a SPEED boat
Emmett's Jeep (man is he going to be pissed! LOL)
and one location that will blow your fucking mind (that’s a secret!)
oh and then of course there is a PLOT....Yes there is one in here somewhere, I just have to remember to add it in once in a while…*giggles*
I AM NOT JOKING WHEN I SAY THAT
SHHHHH.....IS MY FUCKFIC
I HOPE i DON'T LOSE READERS OVER THIS THAT WOULD BREAK MY HEART!

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